Comments on: A Brief Excerpt of Dialogue From The Climax Sequence In A Film I’m Currently Writing, Tentatively Called ‘I Think My Finger Is Stuck In This Coke Bottle’

By: Matt Worzala

Matt Worzala — Wed, 12 Jul 2006 14:41:43 +0000

Wow. I paid for my whole seat, but I’m only using the edge!
Man #1 is going to regret the day he got involved in this whole Coke bottle situation. Some things man was never meant to see.

By: Studio Exec

Studio Exec — Tue, 11 Jul 2006 22:25:33 +0000

Does it have to be a Coke bottle?

By: Pierce

Pierce — Tue, 11 Jul 2006 21:22:17 +0000

More Velociraptors!

By: susan

susan — Tue, 11 Jul 2006 20:26:53 +0000

This is the climax sequence? Are you leaving me to imagine all the scintillating, action/emotion-packed scenes previous to this? Oooooh, I can hardly wait. Too bad things take forever to get into production in Hollywood.

By: Pauly D

Pauly D — Tue, 11 Jul 2006 18:52:18 +0000

Karl – We’re currently out to Larry David (as the guy with his finger stuck in the Coke bottle) and Tim Daly (from NBC’s Wings). Would that be ok?

By: Karl

Karl — Tue, 11 Jul 2006 18:44:46 +0000

Tell me that Man #1 and Man #2 are played by Ricky Gervais and Christopher Guest and I’ll buy my tickets off of Fandango right now.

By: Hilary

Hilary — Tue, 11 Jul 2006 17:06:32 +0000

I so see a fight coming on. Major struggle. Glass breakage. The works.

By: jerry

jerry — Tue, 11 Jul 2006 16:53:48 +0000

perhaps later on in the screenplay you can reveal that Man #2 actually inserted his finger in the bottle to stop the release of a deadly virus contained in the bottle. Right now Man # 2 looks like a fool. This will be a nice way to invoke to audience’s sympathies. Man #2 will be a Don Quixete character.

By: Jeff

Jeff — Tue, 11 Jul 2006 16:40:25 +0000

This has got to be the best post about nothing I’ve read today. Pure genius!

By: Pauly D

Pauly D — Tue, 11 Jul 2006 15:31:28 +0000

Sizz – What would the women be saying? Because I have a sequence I have to write later where two women go through the same damn thing!